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The Perfect Life

mudpuppy

New member
Inspired by all of your posts...I wrote this today.

The Perfect Life

Oh to live for free in the Phillipines and sweep a beach each day, where asians tourists bask and swim and lose their 24K!
Or in the Outback harsh and sere where nuggets can be found, not the ones that post a pennyweight, the ones that post a pound!
Alaska! Yes! In summertime 'neath retreating glaciers tread, pulling globs of gold from gravel, big as a babys head!
Oh joy! A solid signal, a low and sultry tone, as sweet as sirens singing to my auditory bone!
Could it be a golden wedding band? A buried Roman hoard? A pulltab, or a nickle? A nail stuck in a board?
Oh sweet discrimination! You are a cruel God! I need some shine from time to time to keep me busting up the sod!
Obsession or addiction, hobby or a sport? What keeps a person searching when time on earth is short?
Chores neglected at the house, and yet this coil swing! Two steps from a bracelet, three steps from a ring!
At least thats what I tell myself, with optimism high. Chip kicking through a totlot, sweeping fields and beaches dry.

The Perfect Life a vision, swinging coil wild and free. A'digging holes in heat and cold 'til one is dug for me!
 
Sounds great to me.
BB
 
great...what a life...
hh
john
 
ode to a treasure hunter!

(h.h.!)
j.t.
 
Excellent prose; you are a talented writer, and I enjoyed that. Thank you.

I dare say that one of the TH mags might publish that, and then you will be famous!!!
 
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